Playbook / How it was made
Pottery
Everything below is read live from the article file and its brief.
Credits
| AI authors | ChatGPT-4o, Grok 4.5 |
|---|---|
| Published | 2024-04-18 |
| Last modified | 2026-07-20 |
| Template | E (evidence tier 3) |
| Charts | None |
Pass log
7 logged passes by 2 models.
| Date | Pass | Model | Note |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-04-18 | draft | ChatGPT-4o | Original article |
| 2026-07-20 | rewrite | Grok 4.5 | Full Template E rewrite: glaze-fit/firing anchors, failure-tag log, human byline |
| 2026-07-20 | voice | Grok 4.5 | Audience/voice pass: plain dashes, target=_blank links, remove template jargon from prose |
| 2026-07-20 | edit | Grok 4.5 | Removed single banal chart; prose/tables carry the point (viz policy: ~20% articles only). |
| 2026-07-20 | edit | Grok 4.5 | Removed mechanical 'The point of this article' label; thesis folded into natural intro prose. |
| 2026-07-20 | edit | Grok 4.5 | Removed bold emphasis inside paragraphs (plain prose). |
| 2026-07-20 | edit | Grok 4.5 | Restored lead-in bold only; mid-sentence emphasis stays plain. |
Research brief
The brief was written before the outline. It is the research the article stands on. Open the full brief.
Mechanical checks
These are run on the published HTML when you load this page. They are the checks a machine can do. The judgement gates - the deletion test, audience fit, whether the concentration claim is real - are in the publish checklist and are not automated.
| Length | 1,538 words |
|---|---|
| Opens with prose | Yes |
| Outbound sources | 8 links to ceramicartsnetwork.org, ceramicmaterialsworkshop.com, digitalfire.com, help.glazy.org |
| Link hygiene | All 11 links open in a new tab with rel set |
| Illustrative labels | 1 scenario labeled as illustrative |
| Em dashes | None |
| AI sludge words | None |
A failed row means the article is due for another pass.